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Chaos Charged...by ~twisterfiendish

Anthro / Digital Media / Drawings

Don't mess with Chili or he will totally obliterate you 8D

I made it so you can do critiques if you want but if you are going to be some kind of idiot troll then I don't want a bunch of comments from you.

Critique by *ShinZm1911 Feb 9, 2012, 12:03:04 AM

My first thought was, "A blue Tails with a hat and glasses.". Disregarding the technique, which is rough, this character lacks any sort of originality. I would try adding or subtracting some features to make it appear DIFFERENT from Tails, as opposed to to being a simple recolor. Now, regarding the technique, it could use a LOT of work. Firstly, you need to draw based on shapes, ESPECIALLY with characters like these. I would recommend you not draw these characters at all until you get a basic grasp of anatomy, lest you risk stunting yourself as an artist.

The best possible thing you can do for yourself is to study anatomy and draw from life. Also, you need to ditch the mouse for now and draw on paper or use a tablet. The lines on this are extremely choppy, and using a mouse is certainly a part of what's to blame for that.

Now, the colors. That blue is particularly saturated, and quite a bit obtrusive to the eyes. It could definitely do with a bit of desaturation, if not a moderate amount. Also, I understand that you're a new artist, but you should perhaps experiment with some shading (ON PAPER!) to get a grip on making objects appear 3-dimensional, because this comes off as very flat.

Stop worrying about style right now and try to learn some basic technique, as style is simply the artist's take on reality. It is ESSENTIAL to understand reality before you try to stylize it.

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Critique by *mYuAm Sep 10, 2011, 6:56:50 PM

this pic looks like it is unfinshed the pic needs a bit more work on the color and shading. the thing i like about this pic is that the character kinda looks pretty cool and how he blends with the black background. i personally think that this character looks better without the hat.

i think u r getting better at drawing sonic characters now but i dont think your an exellent sonic artist yet. overall its an ok sonic drawing and the colors work togehter but i think u should of put more effort into this pic. all i have to say to u is that keep practising and then u will become a great sonic artist.