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Chaos Charged... by twisterfiendish Chaos Charged... by twisterfiendish
Don't mess with Chili or he will totally obliterate you 8D

I made it so you can do critiques if you want but if you are going to be some kind of idiot troll then I don't want a bunch of comments from you.
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this pic looks like it is unfinshed the pic needs a bit more work on the color and shading. the thing i like about this pic is that the character kinda looks pretty cool and how he blends with the black background. i personally think that this character looks better without the hat.

i think u r getting better at drawing sonic characters now but i dont think your an exellent sonic artist yet. overall its an ok sonic drawing and the colors work togehter but i think u should of put more effort into this pic. all i have to say to u is that keep practising and then u will become a great sonic artist.
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My first thought was, "A blue Tails with a hat and glasses.". Disregarding the technique, which is rough, this character lacks any sort of originality. I would try adding or subtracting some features to make it appear DIFFERENT from Tails, as opposed to to being a simple recolor. Now, regarding the technique, it could use a LOT of work. Firstly, you need to draw based on shapes, ESPECIALLY with characters like these. I would recommend you not draw these characters at all until you get a basic grasp of anatomy, lest you risk stunting yourself as an artist.

The best possible thing you can do for yourself is to study anatomy and draw from life. Also, you need to ditch the mouse for now and draw on paper or use a tablet. The lines on this are extremely choppy, and using a mouse is certainly a part of what's to blame for that.

Now, the colors. That blue is particularly saturated, and quite a bit obtrusive to the eyes. It could definitely do with a bit of desaturation, if not a moderate amount. Also, I understand that you're a new artist, but you should perhaps experiment with some shading (ON PAPER!) to get a grip on making objects appear 3-dimensional, because this comes off as very flat.

Stop worrying about style right now and try to learn some basic technique, as style is simply the artist's take on reality. It is ESSENTIAL to understand reality before you try to stylize it.
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SpiderBoy560 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
The 2nd best draw of Twister
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ribbondragons87 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
Um well I'm not tring to be mean here ok but  his ears need more dental like the inside  aswell as his  sunglasses if you look at most sunglasses  you can almost see there eyes and  his frown. Or expression on his face the line is to long his face looks almost flat to and this dose into really matter becuse most sonic charicters are like this but his head is like the same sise as his body  and I think his eye area is to small to  some shading would Be nice to allso have you ever herd of layers there very helpfull in drawing but the drawing is very good sorry if I sounded mean I didn't mean to  I just wanted to help but you are getting very good overall :)
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fanaticalpokeblack Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student Artist
Chili looks like fox Mc. Cloud to me for an odd reason....
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twisterfiendish Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
I don't really see it, but I did like to play the Starfox games, I must've played Star Fox 64 like a thousand times.
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fanaticalpokeblack Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Artist
O.e i never palyed star fox 64 but the 3ds version i played :/
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wherecanifindbeans Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012
whoa chase this is almost good. a great improvement from nothing huh?
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RintheHitler Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2012
what is this i don't even. :iconwhatisthisplz:
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does Chili have a girlfriend?
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Sonikku-nine Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
A blue tails with sun glasses. Verrrrrrrrrry, um original?
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weareallepictogether Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2011
Is that a hat or an elaborate pair of sunglasses?
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Pixel-777 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A for effort, but remember to shade your stuff and it's going to get better.
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PJ-The-Lunatic Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
welly welly welly well, look who upgraded from MS Paint to PAINT.NET. i see you're moving up in the world, chase
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useredstorm Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
looks cool
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96hcj Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011
I totally agree with Sonichog6
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ThatGamerFan Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Umm....where's his eyes?._. I know he's wearing sun glasses but there's a space between the glasses and his mouth or fur I forgot what's it called.Isn't there suppose to be white there?
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Sonichog6 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
or a hat or whatever it is....its so terrible i couldnt even tell!
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Sonichog6 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ITS JUST A BLUE TAILS WITH SHADES AND A BANDANNA!!!!!
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BlackFilsMyHartNSoul Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2011
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Genderbended Chili....compare.
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Chicaaaaa Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Well, shit.

I'd never though I'd say this, but this is actually a major improvement compared to your old works.

DEARLORDIMSORRYITHADTOBEDONEGAIZ
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Zepher-Tensho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Everyone starts slow. No reason to demean the person who drew it.
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
might I direct you to

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he kinda deserves it
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Zepher-Tensho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes like I'll believe what that fucking site has to say. Theres an article about me on there too but none of the shit there is true.
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
onoes

I read the messages that they post there, not necessarily the full article itself. The article does an excellent job at bringing asses like this to light though. I've read through their other articles, and yeah, some of them are assholes and I went to check 'em out on dA, but fawk, at least the others have a bit of credibility now. This kiddo's living the fucking illusion that he's a great twat. but nope.

He's a douchebag.

Your blurb there by the way is hardly even worth mentioning. It's not even funny. Its almost like some asshole did a google search and happened to find you. lol
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Zepher-Tensho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well that doesn't mean its ok to be an ass. Just look the other way.
And lolwut you saw? Yea its stupid but hey it got me a fuckton of hits~
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Xx-Demon-xX Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2011
your gay
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:iconzepher-tensho:
Zepher-Tensho Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No actually I'm bi but good guess =D
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I should pretend to be a renamon furry
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:iconzepher-tensho:
Zepher-Tensho Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why lol. to get on ED?
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diggledagger Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Your art is really improving! Great job, Twisterfiendish!
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
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:icondiggledagger:
diggledagger Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Opened Pandora's box, my friend...opened Pandora's box...
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:icondaigonite:
daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
OSHI
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diggledagger Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
And Pandora's box was, indeed, opened. Daigonite was one of the first to see the signs of rain...but it became much more than that. Droplets became bigger and...browner? The wind smelled of ass. It was going to be...
The Perfect Shitstorm.
in theaters now!
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
I would watch it. And BAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
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:icondiggledagger:
diggledagger Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
IT'LL BE SAD AS TITS
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
man i

i think imaa gonna need a tishue bawx for all the BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
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daigonite Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
stop encouraging him
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diggledagger Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~**~*~*~*~*~*~*~no~*~**~*~*~*~**~*~*~**~*~*~*~*~*~**~*~**~*~*~
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PurpleHurple Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011
Hey, this isn't great but I love that scraggly effect you have going on around his lineart. Real nice. Though I'm still iffy about cyan and red together... =S
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twisterfiendish Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
I like them because they are opposite colors so it kind of works out together like black and white.
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UnicornBullshizzery Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2011   General Artist
WOAH i just looked at all your comics and this is just like a big improvment. A+ sir A+
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RS-Kyra Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Student Photographer
It's kind of flat and boring, like there should be more to it but there isn't.
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SatAM-Junkie Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011
I dont care what you think. I like this one. Has a.. nice cartoons/sketchy style.
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